One Giant tree had shadows such,
that the seedlings felt so safe,
no storms, no wind,
no scorching heat,
such perfect was their fate !
therein grew a sad seedling once
who kept complaining and hissing,
for the sun, for the wind,
for the challenges,
of storms that he thought he was missing !
there was a happier bush, in the neighboring yard,
who never got a big tree,
but was stronger and greener,
though he faced the storms sooner,
he wondered, how could this be !
when the sad one asked the happy little bush
of the secret of his might,
the latter replied,
to the secure child,
that his attitudes were right !
"Use your Shadows! Build your Roots !"
said he, fetch food, get storm-fit,
as it's not much in what we have got,
it's in what we make of it !
--
Milind
Aaawadla buwa!
ReplyDeleteAww..so beautiful and wise!!
ReplyDeleteThe rhyme is such that this could be a perfect for school textbooks. :)
Well done. You are a natural. :)
thanks!!
ReplyDeleteyes it came to me as a school-time rhyme indeed!
:)
Bravo!
ReplyDeleteA great thought expressed beautifully :)
Keep 'em comin'!
Well done. This is awesome! :)
ReplyDeleteSuperb flow and rhyme. Well done mindil!
ReplyDeletesweet! Loved the rhythm :)
ReplyDeletethank you all!!
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